Friday, 12 June 2015

The Spark Of Death



Learning Reflection
I am learning to write descriptive recount.
I am so proud of being able to write my whole story about the ANZAC landings without getting out of the boat.
It can be tricky to look for a descriptive Title that can grab the readers attention.
My buddy can help me when I am stuck.
The next step for me might be to write a descriptive recount without anybody helping.


1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with how you have sequenced your recount and added details to allow the reader to visualise what is going on.